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(Cause And Effect)By:Wordview by Wordview Published on 06/10/2008

As ever & forever i write lines i enjoy

They are signs of a man still inside of a boy.

 

These words are my worth they are all that i serve

As they surge to emerge up from my inner-earth.

 

When less said is more i'll ignore the rapore

And restore the ore that i hoard in my core.

 

I challenge imbalance with claws and with talons

Assure you my talents are sweeter than melons.

 

Perhaps for a sec. you would pause and reflect

On something relating to "cause & effect".



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Comments

intriguedbyhope commented on 06/15/2008
nice and cute poem. I enjoyed reading it and it sounds nice with the rhyme. =) Keep it up!

Liddie22 commented on 06/11/2008
Your talents speak for themselves...great work! Lid

Wordview commented on 06/12/2008
Thanx Liddie at the risk of blowing my own horn,""Watch this space"".

penniless_poet commented on 06/11/2008
I like this - it's almost like a rap song : )

Wordview commented on 06/12/2008
Thank you so much for the comment.This piece is sort of (rappish)i think also the reason that it comes across that way is because i am as of late venturing into writing poetry with alot more rhyming structure much more so than in my previous works.I have penned quite a few of these poems & will be posting them as time goes on.

TBailey commented on 06/10/2008
I love the message of how we are pulling the thoughts from deep within. Terrific ryhme and metre. Great job! Todd

Wordview commented on 06/11/2008
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment,with that said let me just add that as far as poetry goes writing it in this format is absolutely new to me & i have no idea of what i'm doing,but judging from your reply i must be doing something right.




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