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( The Long Day ) by Wordview Published on 10/23/2008

The day is long, the night is young.

I clean up well & better than you would expect me to.

From prying eyes away i stay.

I am where i belong; "Safe in my surroundings".

The day wears on & i do too.

A world apart my solitude stood.

A sweetly scented summer smell, a gorgeous rose.

A day i will remember, for as long as i live.



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Gary""s Diva commented on 10/28/2008
Gary once again u make my heart soar, and my mind create dimensions i never thought existed. u dared me and i took the challege, i just need time to grasp it all in.....

poewhit commented on 10/23/2008
A nice poem with a good vibe to it

Lombe commented on 10/23/2008
Smell is a wonderfull memory. memories of beautifull days are comforts we can draw on. i like it

blackdeath commented on 10/23/2008
I have no words for you... just a simple good job, well done.




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