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Bleeding Love Part 2 by Shava Published on 04/01/2008


My heart is for you
Beats and bleeds just for you
Yours to have and to hold

Rip it out
Display it on a shelf
Keep it somewhere safe
IT's yours to posess

Mold it, Shape it, Reform it
Anyway you want it
Keep it alive

Don't let the blood stop pumping
It's the love I have for you
Every single drop
Is what keeps it alive

It's fragile you see
Please don't drop it
Your love is what keeps it going
Without you, It will die

WHen you're done with it
Please don't destroy it
Put it back in my chest if you will
The mending process will start anew

Hopefully you won't return it though
You've erased all the scars it once held
The pain has all been washed away
And ti's  yours to have and to hold






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Comments

Marge commented on 04/09/2008
It's beautiful. I really love ""Don't let the blood stop pumping, It's the love I have for you"". The love that you have brings you to life. It's very romantic. Wonderful work.

Angeldeath commented on 04/06/2008
The bleeding and the blood is what is holding us togeather. The beating and the pounding is what is heard in my ears. But i do not what to put your heart back in your chest. Because i do wish to erase all your fears. Angeldeath Adam

Wordview commented on 04/04/2008
Beautiful!A true testament to the hearts worth.

richey commented on 04/03/2008
Excellent poem! I like the idea of the heart being ripped out of the body and given to someone, and then the line; 'put it back in my chest if you will' is great. The poem captures the physical aspects of the heart and combines them with the emotions that go along with it.

mintchocol8chick commented on 04/03/2008
Sweet. My favorite is the first stanza.

mystery commented on 04/02/2008
An all-embracing love becomes the beating core of life. Nicely done!

fellwalker commented on 04/02/2008
very nice shannon, when we give our hearts totally, it would be good to think that they will be cared for tenderly, what we give, we do not want returned! x

nitepoet commented on 04/02/2008
the power of true love can erase all the broken pieces of the past.. and if love should end the heart has such resounding strength to mend itself in time..




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