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Your love is gone
The memories still remain
The wounds are deep
The scars are real
Hurting with each passing day
Recollecting thoughts inside my mind
The good, the bad, and the pleasant
We had everything
I did my best to make you happy
Gave you my all
Made you my top priority
But my best wasn't good enough
Falling apart
Loseing my grip
Wanting desperately to be
The holder of your heart
Lost in your gaze
That once put me in a trance
My thoughts trace back to you
And the day you let me go
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Comments
Marge
commented on 05/03/2008 It is so hard to watch the figure we love very much just walks out from our heart. The memories are the reason why we still keep him/her. Be well, shava. Very cool write anyway.
Angeldeath
commented on 05/03/2008 LOL you are a great liar. YOu gave me everything but your trust...
Alison
commented on 05/02/2008 So sorry for U Shava, these are v.painful feelings to have to cope with, U've captured these feelings very well in Ur write... Experience is a good thing to have, and believe me there will be many more to come. As Michele said, don't blame anyone, it just wasn't meant to be this time... I always tell my daughter to take the relationship slow and steady, don't go rushing in head over heels, it makes it easier if things don't work out...
Time will soften the blow... Take care!
-Ally-
yoyi
commented on 05/02/2008 Like Mystery, I really think pain seem to be gushing out of this write like wounds from a deep cut. There are 4 things we can't get back but 2 will I state here; a stone... after it has been thrown, an occasion... after is has been loss. Take heart and be bold to love again
nitepoet
commented on 05/02/2008 the vastness of one's heart screaming out to a love that is no longer. sometimes love can be more painful than death itself for each day memories come flooding back into your thoughts of how special that one person was and now all that remains is the emptiest that crushes your soul..
yet each love that embraces us and ends is a path we all must walk for in the end it prepares us for the day that one true love will sweep us off our feet and erase all the pain we have endured..
love the way you put such feelings and emotions in this piece because it allows the reader to feel the devastation you are having to endure..
dying2die
commented on 05/02/2008 and every wound one day heels or cured .. but the mark always remain sometimes recalling th eonce felt pain..
May you be healed.
Awesome write
Abdul Malik
commented on 05/01/2008 The feeling we feel is out of this world when we get to keep the one we love. But when we don't, nothing is more devastating. The trick is in standing stable in either case.
mystery
commented on 05/01/2008 When love ends, there are always questions. ""Where did I go wrong?"" and ""Why wasn't I good enough?"" are a couple of the most troubling. Love ends for many different reasons and it serves no purpose to blame anyone especially yourself. It was just not meant to be at this point in time. Take comfort in that. The pain of the break screams from this piece. Well-written and powerfully moving!
fellwalker
commented on 05/01/2008 the wounds and scars losing a love cause are very real, but just like physical wounds, they do heal in time, trust me on that!
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