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( No Less ) by Wordview Published on 10/10/2008

What would You say if i told You

That i will find a way to hold You?

You wanna know?Then let me show You

That You will be my only Girl.

 

For me to be now You are essential

I must admit You're something special

To do for You only the best will

So long as it's kept confidential

You are my notebook i'll be Your pencil

For You i'd buy that string of pearls.

 

You are my sunshine and these are dark days

Responsible for all my heartaches

Into Your eyes it's like i star gaze

Meanwhile my head just spins and twirls.

 

You drive me crazy You leave me breathless

And i don't care You make me wreckless

You are a gem to me You're precious

I'll love You in & out of dresses

I'll even help You clean Your messes

And after that i'll leave this world.

 

We'll always begin there'll be no ending

So what's the use of us pretending?

And all this time that we've been spending

It won't give in it's unrelenting

It's up to us to see that it works.

 

I'll be Your best friend You'll be my lover

We won't get rid of one another

I swear on my life for You i'd suffer

You are my breakfast,lunch & supper

And after meals i'll be desert.

 

You're always changing You're never the same

Don't understand?Then let me explain

"He" gave you more i'll give You less pain

You scream my name i'm on the next train

So Baby why don't we just merge?

 

What's mine is Yours too it's never "My Space"

So bring Your toothbrush back to "Our Place"

I'll let you in & out of my days

I know what You want of course i'll try taste

I'll lick You up & down & sideways

I'll lick untill i feel Your heart race

And that's No Less than You Deserve.



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Gary""s Diva commented on 10/28/2008
hmmmmmm......... i immediately began envisioning notes to this 1, gary!!!!!!!!!! oh gary!!!!!!!

flutterby commented on 10/15/2008
""Into Your eyes it's like I star gaze. Meanwhile my head just spins and twirls."" my fave lines :] this whole poem rlly defines almost near perfect, the feeling when you completely adore someone. as I was reading it, the feelings seemed to consist more of adoration/admiration, rather than love and being in love. I gathered that you were portraying what superior company is to u. rlly like this poem and how it flowed :] love the title you gave this as well. great write. xx

Wordview commented on 10/22/2008
Thank you so much for reading this piece i wasn't sure how it would be recieved especially since it isn't a poem but a song (i should have indicated that my bad).I wrote this song for a friend of mine who needed something in this line, and me being the artist that i am had to come up with the goods so to speak.Let me just say though, that what you interpreted as adoration was actually the real thing (not that it matters now anyway).""We live, we love, we lose, we learn"".




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