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Rain Your Love by intriguedbyhope Published on 10/19/2007


Silent thoughts in a heavy fall,
Twinkling droplets, down they crawl
Leaving traces of silver lines,
Down my window glass they shine.

My eyes would follow every trail,
of every head and every tail
of every droplet I can see
but each would run away from me.

The pour it never stops until...
...green creatures they have got their fill
...farmers they have found their rest,
...children learn to wait with will.
The pour it never stops until..
its time the sun decides to lead,
knowing it must humble down,
and grace to the humble is abound.

I closed my eyes and held my thoughts,
walked pass by all my battles fought
I looked behind and clearly saw
My scars and failures, all my flaws.

My legs they followed every trail,
of ev'ry memory that prevailed,
of ev'ry tear drop I have left,
none would dry as they damp my path.

The rain it falls so abundantly,
Like your love, you lavish upon me.
In times like these that I can see,
I thirst for you to no degree.
You fill me and I find rest,
My mind and will was put to test
But, I will wait as you teach your child,
and I will learn how to smile
in times like these..

Father, friend, my help in need,
The One who washes my wounds that bleed,
The One who heals, and changes me,
The One who is and will always be.



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Comments

Carrie commented on 10/19/2007
wow this is really good i liked the connection between the earth needing rain and us needing god keep writing

mystery commented on 10/19/2007
I really like ""Twinkling droplets, down they crawl Leaving traces of silver lines"". The comfort of love and support gives the courage to live a wondrous life despite mistakes and mis-steps. Nicely done!

poewhit commented on 10/19/2007
Nothing like looking out the window on a rainy day sometimes.

Wordview commented on 10/19/2007
Beautifully written & well expressed keep it up well done.




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