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the one word game!! by Trev 22 Published on 06/24/2007

me and a friend wrote this while playing the one word at a time game, that is why this poem is just for fun beacuse we were board!

 

i told you once, i told you twice,

i told you not to roll the dice.

only time will foretell,

the curse that is worse than hell.

 

the dark of night draws near,

you are no longer a loyal pioneer.

you have engaged in piracy,

and have broken the laws of privacy.

 

your courage was understandable,

but you knew it was a gamble.

your life will suffer in evil,

from those who are primeval.



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Comments

suzanne commented on 03/07/2009
i love coming back on here and re-reading old poetry that was so good the first time. i know poetry comes from with in but it would be nice to see some new wrties from u. u were so good i know u havent lost it x me x

Damowest commented on 12/16/2007
5 stars =)

suzanne commented on 06/26/2007
i think the meanign was not of gambling with object or money but the gamble with someones life a choice that had to be made, i could be reading to deep as u siad this poem was just for fun good write xox

Trev 22 commented on 06/26/2007
you're right about the gambling with someones life. an you are not reading too much into it!! thanks for reading it. love your cousin trev

jerseysue commented on 06/25/2007
Loved it Sue x

Trev 22 commented on 06/25/2007
thanks but it's not a very good poem it was a joke poem between me and a friend. thanks anyway.

poewhit commented on 06/24/2007
GAMBLING is all down hill with a few bumps upward. That addiction is worse than drugs.

Trev 22 commented on 06/25/2007
i'm not sure if your comment is saying that you like it or not, but thank you for taking the time to read it and leave a comment.

poewhit commented on 06/25/2007
I think gambling hurts poor people, trying to make the kill, they end up on the bookie shitlist,and their families suffer. If you have the wealth good loose it to the boards, gambling is a rich mans pleasure, not poor mans. I personally have never been to a casino and may only once, just to look, but that is even remote.




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