poetic Beauty
commented on 03/01/2008
This is really very good!!!!
Angeldeath
commented on 11/01/2007
Yes the waves of the ocean my be endless but the tides are just as imporant. for they rise but they can fall.
Angeldeath
Adam
theredbookoflove
commented on 09/22/2007
hello9 to the passionate finger tips of this write i think it was a very nice poetic journey reading your words here
julia
Colm
commented on 09/02/2007
As for the topic, I have no comments. However, the poetic aroma of the text is non-existent. Try to use words that reflect row feelings! You seem to have what it takes!
faridahsimpson@hotmail.com
commented on 07/11/2007
oooooo.... so romantic. beautiful poem. great poet . may god bless you always in all ways.
faridahsimpson@hotmail.com
commented on 07/11/2007
oooooo.... so romantic. beautiful poem. great poet . may god bless you always in all ways.
faridahsimpson@hotmail.com
commented on 07/11/2007
oooooo.... so romantic. beautiful poem. great poet . may god bless you always in all ways.
BDaniels
commented on 05/23/2007
Only we can know if the fire can be rekindled, but only you know if you have enogh gas in your tank to rekindle the fire....
poewhit
commented on 05/09/2007
Don't get caught in the seaweeds of the ocean of life. There are many harbors and shores to be found. Sometimes we get hung-up on the past, because it was a love. We all seek love in life,unknowing to the person, a past love becomes a fixation, only because it was a love, and there was a warmth. But the camp fire is burnt out most of the times with only embers. Though wood can rekindle.?????????????????????????????
troubled_rainbow
commented on 05/09/2007
Some times we can go back, and sometimes we can't. Thanks for sharing
Carla