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Published on 2006-10-05 00:00:00.0
Written in a NEUTRAL mood
by poemprophet
who I am 87 views
Published on 2006-10-05 00:00:00.0
Written in a NEUTRAL mood
by poemprophet
In times of sorrow & stress & strife
We're urged to nurse the best in life.
Adjust we must from dawn to dusk
And thus we must reform to dust
If what's in us does not disgust
We must discuss our love for lust.
Our do's & don'ts decide our dooms
We're scarred & so we hide our wounds.
But a thing of beauty such as verse
Ensures,procures it's just deserts
As free as birds from dusty perch
Would we not place our trust in words?
Untill a perfect understanding will
Our instincts are an animal's
Inducement of these dangling thrills
Indulgence sees us standing still.
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Wordview
commented on 09/16/2008 Oh WOW this way more than i ever expected i'm glad that this piece is making such a positive impact on all.
Wordview
commented on 08/20/2008 O wow thanx this was just a way for me to work through some of the things i was struggling with,actually i found out that writing poetry is actually my greatest friend (including u of course)
ychinesepoem
commented on 07/26/2008 It's a powerful poem,I like so many sentences in it:We're urged to nurse the best in life;We're scarred & so we hide our wounds;Indulgence sees us standing still. Well done!
Wordview
commented on 09/16/2008 Thank you very much i'm sorry for responding now only but it seems somehow your comment slipped through the cracks of my indulgence.
penniless_poet
commented on 07/11/2008 I love the way the words flow in this - if only people would put their trust in words! : )
penniless_poet
commented on 07/11/2008 I love the way the words flow in this - if only people would put their trust in words! : )