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Smile by poedes Published on 03/20/2008


She's a smiler

She's so sweet

See her moving to the beat

Dancing to the song I wrote

Makes me feel real good

She's a smiler

She's so sweet

See her moving to the beat

Showing me her passion

As she's moving on so neat

She's a smiler

She's so sweet

See her moving to the beat

Wanna get to know that girl

Moving to my song so sweet

She's a smiler

She's so sweet

See her moving to the beat

Wishing our eyes would meet

As she's moving like a treat

She's a smiler

She's so sweet

As she's moving to the beat

Now she locks me in her eyes

Yes I think she's worth a try

She's a smiler

She's so sweet

See her moving to the beat

Yes I'll go and dance with her

Let me be enhanced by her



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Comments

trynfinity commented on 03/28/2008
What and interesting way of looking at dating and love at its very first conception. It's sweet and hopeful, and I love the picture that you started it off with. Well done.

poedes commented on 03/28/2008
Dating is certainly an important moment in our life, thanks for understanding it so much. Talk soon xxx

poedes commented on 03/22/2008
Well, how about you going out to dance maybe who knows... Thanx again for taking your time and reading, wish you all the luck, love and happyness in the whole wide world. xxx t.

flutterby commented on 03/22/2008
a very pretty poem. a smile so sweet can tempt and draw, sometimes leading to new beginnings. love the last two lines :) tgc xxx

mystery commented on 03/21/2008
A smile that lights up the room and the siren call of music make an irresistible combination. Nicely done!

poedes commented on 03/21/2008
Thank you so much for always looking in on me and reading. Have a beautiful day Bless you

poewhit commented on 03/20/2008
I good smile is like having a million dollars

poedes commented on 03/21/2008
right you are but a million dollars wouldn't be bad either...lol bless you




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