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fatal doom by suzanne Published on 02/17/2007


it seems a minute when we're together

an eternity when we're apart

it seems forever that I've known you

and I've loved you from the start

i don't know what i saw in you

and i don't know why it stopped

but when we are together

my heart just seems to drop

into and everlasting whirlwind

of happiness and joy

and i never seem to notice

the time that passes by

but then i have to leave you

I'm feeling so alone

but for now i ever wonder

would you have been my own?

is this the end or just the start

will you tell me soon

or forever i will ponder

into my fatal doom.



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Comments

suzanne commented on 03/07/2009
. . . there is no particlar man about this one there is no someone there is no heartach. this was just me over thinking a situation that i can not discuse.

sparklinlady commented on 08/17/2007
very sweet....

sweet sorrow commented on 02/18/2007
good one. keep writing




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