keykay
commented on 04/27/2008
Great work!...this is so intense...i defiently understand where you're coming from...
genie
commented on 04/23/2008
Your poem for me is like going into a dark tunnel Shava......................you sound so in pain............but do remember there is light at the end of every tunnel how ever far away you think it is.......................
You have so much life to live and so much lovely poetry to write......................
Marge
commented on 04/23/2008
Like someone said, ""Too much love will kill you"". The fear of losing love sometimes it leaves us at the dark side of life. When love that uses to bring the light into our life is getting off, all I can think is give up on life. Feels like losing grip. Wonderful write.
nitepoet
commented on 04/19/2008
sometimes it is easier to give up than to face life alone when we loose someone we love and cherish..
mystery
commented on 04/19/2008
When we give away the self in love, we are left with no one when love dies. Powerful write!
Abdul Malik
commented on 04/19/2008
What happened again? I thought everything was going all right! You'll pull through this. Give love a chance. You deserve it.